Thursday, April 9, 2009

chapter one

hey, just wanted to share my book with the world, tell me what ya think. dont hold back, i can take it.

tiara woke to the sounds of a new day in the kabira village. the sounds werent peaceful like they used to be but sounds of war, war between them and the cade clan. the war started 10 years ago and never found end. it was all over a book. you see, the clans used to be as one. their suprem leader, alge 2, left them the book of all knowing secrets, garenteed to bring them good luck and teach them magic, magic beyond their reachs of understanding. right now the kabira village held the book, but every day that was threatened. tiara is one of the young warriors, her 16th birthday just passed a month ago. she was an outcast, every one pretended to adore her but just to get her fathers wealth. you see she is the only desendant of alge 2. her home was huge, but sadly she had few friends to invite over. those friends were, nick, josh, james, bryain, and meghan. they also had weird features, but tiara liked them because they accepted her for who she was not what her fathers wealth was. they never asked for money, they didnt like hand outs, but still she insitsted on byeing food for their familys. tiara held her bow, sweat forming and slidding down. she was nervous, yes, but ready to defend her country. her puprle hair brushed and her clothes fastened, she left the house a bold look planted on her face.

i meat with josh outside, his curved sword in hand and still bloody from the last go round. meghan was sitting this one out, she recived a wound to her leg last time that almost coast her that limb. now she was in the hospital resting. james and bryain were out on a mission so that only left the three of us, me, josh, and nick. nick used a bow also, his a little bigger and painted red to indacate posion. mine was green, to indacate power. when i hit someon the limb hit burst into shreds. this procces was clean and little blood was involved. all the other troops huried past us as we stopped briefly to chat, giving no second glances. ' nick, hows meghan?' meghan was his sister, though he wasnt proud of it. meghan wasnt the best fighter, but her spirit was good all the same. she and josh were the first to take me in after mounths of cheating and fights with my no good leechers that followed me. ' not good, she might not be able to fight tomarrow either'. he reported. i looked down at the stone side walk 'darn' i mumbled. josh gavce the signal an dwe moved out, a battle taking place at the main gate. me and nick were statined on the walls, josh fought below us. the enemy wasnt as weak as the experanced fighters made it look, i already had a posion arrow sticking from my shoulder. nick fought beside me, yes, but he was just a blur. ' tiara, we need you down here! since your shoulders wounded, grab a sword and come on!' yelled general berkson. i obeyed, though i liked my posistion on the wall better. nick gave me a glanced as i speed down the ladder and jumped the last few steeps. general barkson is in his twenties, black hair and a very serious look. he tossed me a long sword and pointed a finger to my new battle. i sighed and went to find josh.

meghan

as the sounds of war meat my ears from outside i longed to be there with them, fighting. even if i did get injured, i want some of the action. instead im forced to stare at a fan. the white ciling and the metal fan repeating itself over and over. it drived me insane, causing my wound to ache. ' can i get you anything?' asked a doctor. i looked up, sitting on my rolling bed. my room wasnt very big and it was extremly hot. i scowled, ' a sword, i want to fight' i grumbled. he chuckled, that only deepened my scowl. ' how about lunch' he asked. i nodded, though i really didnt want to. i held my hands in sweaty balls of anger. i would find a way out, if i had to brake a few rules tiara could cover me.

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